Story spine - personification - Rapunzel
Today's #afewwordsaday #KAFWAD submission
Why not join me? Today's prompts are below. Prompts for the rest of the week are in a separate post just below.
17th September 2015
Prompts / date | 17th September 2015 |
FMS Photo a day | I never |
Text type | Plot skeleton I’m going to use these 7 ‘Story Spine’ sentence starters: Once upon a time there was Every day, Until one day…. Because of that… Because of that…. Until finally….. Ever Since that day |
Sentence type | Personification of weather |
Story | Rapunzel |
Personification of weather | Imagery, adds emotion | Give a type of weather a human mood. | Norman was beaten and whipped by the hail. The breeze gently stroked her face. |
Once upon a time there was a girl with long hair who lived in a tower in the middle of a forest. She had been taken from her parents as a baby as a punishment for her father stealing salad leaves from the witch’s garden to satisfy her mother’s craving.
Every day the witch who took her visited, using Rapunzel’s long hair to climb up the tower.
Until one day a prince heard Rapunzel singing and saw how beautiful she was and he copied how the witch climbed her hair. They fell in love and planned her escape. Rapunzel accidently gave the game away.
Because of that the witch was angry and cut off Rapunzel’s hair, casting her out into the wilderness. When the Prince came, the witch threw her hair down for him and when he was close to the window she let the hair go. He fell to the ground and was blinded by thorns below.
Because of that he spent years wandering aimlessly through wastelands.
Until finally the winds guided him to the wilderness where Rapunzel now lived. He heard her sing and they fell into each other’s arms. Rapunzel’s tears fell on his eyes and healed them.
Ever since that day, they lived happily with their own children in his kingdom. And the witch? She was trapped for ever in the tower with no means of escape.
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