The Mouse and the Lion - lipogram - verb, person


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23rd September

Well, as this is about a mouse and a lion, the only vowel left is an ā€˜aā€™. Letā€™s see how I get on.

Prompts / date
23  September 2015
FMS Photo a day
 yellow
Text type
lipogram  
Sentence type
Verb, person
Story
The mouse and the lion

verb, person
gives sentence importance
verb is followed by a comma then name or personal pronoun
Tiptoeing, he tried to sneak out.



Lipogram
Another Oulipian technique
The text is constrained by excluding a particular letter, usually a vowel.

The little grey mouse bumped into the huge, sleeping, yellow lion in the forest. Unwisely, he climbed up onto the lion, crowing: ā€œSnoozy old lions do not bother us mice!ā€ The lion, by now not sleepy, but wired, held the mouse down. His mouth drooling, thinking of his dinner.
The mouse begged for its life, ā€œDonā€™t kill me. In time I will help you!ā€  The lion, finding this thought ridiculous, let the mouse go.
The next morning, the mouse does indeed help the lion, who is in a hunterā€™s net. The mouse chewed through the rope. The lion is reprieved, he couldnā€™t believe it: ā€œYou wonderful mouse!ā€



I have an ā€˜aā€™ ā€“ just one! Can you help me out? Can you Change that sentence?

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